If you haven’t read the latest comic. Read it. It’s out. Really glad everyone liked it; the average rating was 10/10, which is cool, so thank you. Someone mentioned it was nice to read through the feedback a few comics ago, so I thought I’d just paste the first 150 or so comments below.
Pictured is the render that was going to be the cover, but that I rejected mid-render because it was too boring! In a few days I’ll post the other failed renders, just for fun. I don’t normally have leftovers, but I wanted to get the final scene right in comic #7, so there’s a bunch of rejected renders to post.
Anyway here’s some of the feedback (thank you):
Question: what did you think?
Answers:
| after so long i have come across a comic of class, sheer brilliance | |
| Brillant | |
| I melted on the lovey-dovey part, like, literally, i now am a walking mass of tenderness. | |
| THE BEST EVER! | |
| Simply: incredible. More detailed: easily the most well written comic of its genre | |
| Fantastic work! Well worth the wait. | |
| We loved it | |
| This is one of the best comics I have ever had the pleasure of laying my eyes upon. | |
| It’s perfect | |
| Just AWESOME | |
| Gyeurghhh!!! | |
| Best one!!! WoW, this made me cum so hard!!! | |
| very good | |
| Meh it was OK, in the same way onne might describe the paccific as a damp little puddle | |
| Goddamn fucking amazing | |
| It is realy good comic | |
| I need a second penis with which to realize my erection | |
| My mind is blown. You have completely outdone yourself. I stand rather awkwardly (for reasons) in awe. | |
| Briliant. | |
| Couple of jumps (needed a second read to get it) but solid never the less. | |
| Fantastic fantasy | |
| masterpiece | |
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What do i think ??? WHAT DO I THINK ?? im here, waiting for your comics – that’s enough to said
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| Outstanding! Your comics get better with each release! | |
| i was absolutely enchanted. it was by turns funny and sweet and yet also high octane boner fuel. | |
| One word. Magnanimus | |
| Good lord its amazing | |
| I don`t usually get turned on by comics, but i now have a hole in the front of my pants, so thnx for ruining my pants;). | |
| Freaking awesome. It just kept going. | |
| Loved it | |
| It’s great! | |
| Excellent | |
| Well, I , you , um…gosh….again? | |
| Awesome! | |
| the best | |
| AWESOME | |
| Wonderful, even better than prior work | |
| amazing !!! | |
| Jack[189]:”Daaamn, yeah family bathtime is AMAZING!” | |
| It was worth the wait! | |
| Hngaggrkk! | |
| It was the best one yet, and I have a thing for aliens so the others really hit that spot. | |
| WOW | |
| Are you serious? After this i needed to get my wife for… you know… hnnggggg | |
| Amazing, incredible sexy, and well worth the wait | |
| Well worth the wait, can’t wait for the next one, no I reall can’t please post now. | |
| Fantastic bit of literature that deals with very real and complex issues. The author knows how to build tension in a way that truly keeps the reader engaged. The character interaction and intimate moments are believable and thought provoking. Dialogue never feels out of place or forced. The renderings are top notch and a true feat for the eyes. One could be fooled into believing that this was made by a team of individuals, but, it was a solo effort. She should be proud of her work. In summation: 10 out of 10, will read again… also bewbs, spunk, and satisfaction. | |
| An absolute master(bation) piece! | |
| great | |
| hhnhnnhlk | |
| Don’t know. Havent read it yet. | |
| Good story/fantasy, the song was a really good idea, I liked it. Simply amazing, just like the others before, great work! | |
| Perfect | |
| My god…. Masterful story telling, very believeable emotions, and Evey Reborn was an epic choice for that scene. It almost felt like I was there (in a non-voyeristic way). It absolutely made the comic in a way I’ve never seen before. 100 out of 10! I can’t wait to see what you come up with next. Maybe another scene with music? Maybe? 🙂 | |
| Much better than the early ones, gotta say I’ve never seen a woman with as long of a belly as Charlie does | |
| Just perfect … no words | |
| O M F G … my brain is now fried… | |
| 10/10 Was so good that I took my time and stayed up 2 hours enjoying all the work put into it. | |
| OMFG AMAZING | |
| Absolutely brilliant. I’m glad it wasn’t split in to smaller issues. | |
| I came three times. | |
| Was great, keep it up | |
| Fan-freaking-tastic | |
| It was great, tons of fun and stimulation | |
| MIND-BLOWING | |
| i just discovered you on e-hentai last night and read all your works there in one go. it’s kind of hard for me to see this tree from the rest of your forest. your works have inspired me to get up off my ass and really break through the writer’s block that’s left me creatively crippled for 6 months. i cannot thank you enough. as for the comic itself: pure genius! | |
| Touching, awesome, people I’ve become to really care about | |
| Holy Shit!!! | |
| Fantastic | |
| Очень классно! | |
| It’s so awesome I’m in awe! | |
| It’s absolutely exceeded all expectations | |
| Well finally!! And well worth the wait. Girlfriend and I loved it. Proved a little tricky to follow at times as we decided to act out some of the scenes!! Frapping Awesome. One tiny bit of constructive. Your pussy closeups are detailed and accurate. Jack’s dick however could do with a bit more detail. xx | |
| Most excellent job | |
| Besides it’s enourmous erotic potential (like, really really erotic), it bears quite the message. I like that. Not just some random “freestyle express humping” but an actual developing storyline. Besides I like your way of thinking. | |
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I thought it was put together fantastically. The humor was great and the awkward cringe moments were just as funny as the outright humor. The lighting and attention to detail was in my opinion perfectly, even the short scene on the station as well as the sleeping scene. I applaud you for your dedication and attention to detail and thoroughly enjoy the story you are telling with each of your series.🤙
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| It is on another level, it got way more content then other comics. | |
| Greates one | |
| Speachless it’s awesome | |
| Best ever | |
| “thumb up” | |
| thumb up | |
| The best. You are surpisinh me everytime with the buildup of the suspense | |
| awesome | |
| amazing! setting new standards in adult comic storytelling. | |
| Magnificent! | |
| cant have enough…i think i’m gonna need to reset and fap at least 4-5 more times in the next hour | |
| Wonderful. | |
| Loved it! | |
| Extremely hornifying. | |
| Its Awesome.. | |
| Excellent | |
| Absolute fucking tastic, i don’t want to some vulgar and i apologize but is hard to find an author that can make something compelling to read and at the same time make it hot (? Sorry but my english sucks and is like 4 am) | |
| Great – loved it | |
| Fantastico | |
| Amazing loved it been waiting for that climax and still I need more. | |
| fucking amazing | |
| Really great pice of art | |
| Amazing, top quality, youve truly outdone yourself | |
| Perfect | |
| It’s like an Ovidio’s elegy. | |
| Is amazing. | |
| YISSSSSS | |
| Amazing non stop buildup until the final scenes, which reminded me of Nakani’s doujinshis | |
| i love it | |
| Fucking amazing! | |
| This is an Extraordinary Graphic Story! This an original and deserves praise and awards. | |
| Amazing! Unparalleled! Erotic! Witty! Fabulous! Nothing Else Like It! Now I Want Lithium 8! | |
| Magnificent | |
| It was great for the most part, the serious but just after the shopping trip in front of the mirror through me off a bit though. | |
| Outstanding | |
| I saw, I conquered, and I came so hard I arrived. | |
| 10/10 | |
| Amazing, the best one to date. | |
| Very well done, Sindy! You do have a couple of things to say. And wrapping them in such delicious images of the two innocently inevitably attracted-to-each-other young heroes is an idea of genius, perfectly carried out. | |
| Very well done, Sindy! You do have a couple of things to say. And wrapping them in such delicious images of the two innocently inevitably attracted-to-each-other young heroes is an idea of genius, perfectly carried out. | |
| excellent! | |
| Loved it | |
| I bit long; editing would not be out of the question; when getting his head cleaned by Charlie, Jack could have played with Charlies bits while she was prone on the floor…he could have played with her bits. | |
| Amazing | |
| So long! Very nudes! Much wow! | |
| It’s just amazing! | |
| I think it is fantastic. Has some humor and plot moving forward | |
| Fantastic. Your best so far by far | |
| Amazing | |
| Loved it! |
Question: what was your favourite bit?
Answers:
| Unknown-evil pawn spitting on his/her helmet. |
| The tub game, the oral (especially the sitting part), the kissing and the REAL feeling of love. |
| I really can’t help but to love the henchmen, always gives me a laugh and a break |
| The Musical interlude of Evey Reborn – Dario Marianelli in their last (First?) Lovemaking scene was the perfect addition to the reading of those pages. One of the best that I have ever experienced. Thank You for Your hard work in this Volume of Lithium 7, I appreciate it! Cheers! |
| When he realized the joy of a good bj. AAH magic moments |
| That’s cute. “Favorite bit”. (like the whole series isn’t everyone’s favorite already) |
| Yes just yes |
| developing of them to the max |
| The bath scene… just half? lol |
| Her blowjob!! Cause i love to get blowjobs and cum in a warm mouth! |
| Teasing 🙂 |
| I quite liked the start and was enjoying the middle when the end came along! A bit like Charlie really |
| The whole thing, really. But my favorite is when Jack ties Charlie up and has his way with her. |
| Knifen situation, because it is sexless part and it is realy good dialog |
| Full nude penetrative sex (ala bath and love making) |
| My favorite part starts around page two and ends right at the end. Seriously it is the tied to the bed pussy eating. |
| The part where Jack stops charlie from cuting hereslef. |
| Got to say the suggestion to play that song for the last 25 pages was just… spot on. I know this sounds like ass kissing but dont care. Always though some scenes comics needed the right background song while reading them. |
| The entire story line |
| all of it dont need to tell you i’ve waited so long for this moment |
| Sexy bits… because – err – sex is best! |
| the bit where charlie just mugs for the viewer after the “just inside?” made me laugh actually out loud. definite favorite there, but tbh it was all killer and no filler for me(which is less specific, so prolly less helpful) |
| Honestly, when Jack just made Charlie drop the knife and talked about their real mom and what she went through. Kinda hit a tiny bit close to home. |
| When they made love |
| The bath scene, so sexy and hot (shiny). |
| My favorite bit was the bathtub “half doesn’t count right?” bit because it shows just how horny both of them are. They make their own rules. |
| It sounds silly, but my favorite bit was the correct usage of blood is thicker then water. 😀 |
| The build up to climatic scenes is so good and unbearable at the same time. Drama |
| It was nice all around, but the music bit really lifted it. I was skeptical when I read about it earlier, but somehow it matched up to the pages just right, it really dictated a mood, where otherwise you’re left to make something up in your head. I guess that’s why they use musical scores in movies, it sets the tone. Either way, it worked far better than I thought it would. |
| The bathtub was a lot of fun |
| The last scene. Because it’s the siblings finally submitting to their lust. |
| the ending |
| ALL OF IT |
| That your work has emotional depth |
| when Charlie gave him a blow job,,, |
| The back and fourth in the night. |
| Despite the fact I am craving for the sex scenes, I like the “endless” foreplay they do. I like that they just don’t jump on each other. |
| really liked the bit between p1 and p264? I really enjoyed the 2:56am gag on p193. |
| The end. When they make love. I dunno, call me corny or whatever, but I do love people just… loving each other. |
| p 224 Puts the story to a whole new level |
| The tension between them, my heart is pounding every time. I freaking love this!!!! |
| The sex in the bathtub |
| Page 212 first panel, Love HHTTG |
| The bit where Jack stops Charlie from cutting. Very real and I’ve been in that situation from Jack’s perspective. |
| The candid talk about masturbating. Being casual about something intimate has always been a huge turn on for me, your work tickles my fancy with sniperlike precision. |
| the bath scene 🙂 |
| Probably something inside i assume. Again, haven’t read it yet but i assume it is going to be awesome. |
| The night part. You painted the “heat” between the two very well with this part. |
| Jack talking to Charlie about making his first time mean something |
| The lovemaking scene of course! I could feel the passion they shared, from the beginning of the scene before they made love to the climax. The song ended right after they came together, which coincidentally (or not ;-P) was the same time I did. And it was epic, let me tell you…. |
| The music part, it fit pretty well |
| Everything is really cool, a great story … |
| bath time will NEVER be the same |
| I liked the love making scene at the end. The song you said to put on brought the whole thing to another level. |
| When charlie wants to go shopping & starts to tell her fantasies to jack to persuade him to join. |
| The bit with the music. That was a fantastic idea. The emotions and expressions were good too. ^^ |
| The sex, it teased so well, with a sudden push balls deep. |
| The first and last part; love nudity |
| Tying her to the bed. I’ve always wanted to do that exact same thing to my girlfriend for the exact same reaso but she’s to chicken. |
| Bit as humouristic moment? Most of them, winks at the reader and jokes in the story. |
| pages from 15 to 66 and from 81 to 94 |
| as a (wanna-be) writer i have to say that your pacing is damn near perfect. the build-up to the consummation that occurs in this comic was so long but never felt meandering or wasteful. the pay-off was satisfying and felt earned by the characters. the breakthrough moment between Charlie and Jack felt magical. |
| Page 225, where they take each others hands after deciding they don’t have play games anymore. (Though I hope they’ll figure out that games still are a lot of fun.) |
| She’s worried about Skylar. |
| The whole fucking thing (sorry for the bad word) |
| Lots to say… the dialogs, the models (their faces mainly), the story |
| ALL OF IT |
| The intimate attention to detail – both story and art. |
| The conflict that was brought into play after the shopping. |
| There were many. Perhaps mostly the part with Jack stoping his sister from hurting herself. I could connect to the way both were thinking. It reminded me of some experiences of my own past. |
| The morning before school, were he refuses to play games. It was a good plot twist, and a satisfing shift in tone. To embrase love as pure and wonderful as it is. A great moment. |
| Hell of a comic |
| nice sex? (reading it gives me huge boner…) |
| c/o e-hentai (maybe i can download this from google later?) |
| The bath scene, how they finally getting in ther more and more |
| there has to be a favorite? |
| entire series!! |
| The whole “we haven’t done it yet because it didn’t go all the way in” series of scenes and story was the best bit for me because it brought back some memories. |
| the bathtub. Because they’ve finally given in after all the steamy foreplay and teasing. |
| 6:0whatever, the moment Jack walks away from Charlie. It’s so rare to find any media that allows guys to want romance for themselves. His little speech is a bit naive but really sweet and honest and all I ever wanted for… |
| The scene where Jack tells Charlie his wish for his “first time”, the look of understanding from Charlie and from there words are not needed |
| The end of the knife scene, when Charlie realizes that Jack had ignored the blade stuck in his foot for the whole conversation, just to help talk through her depressive thoughts… with love. |
| When jack proposed charlie that he wants to love her properly….. |
| the bedrooms visits because they are honnest with their feelings and sharing them plus their teenage stamina |
| When Jack finally opens up about his first time being real and not a game, because that is the dream, 2 persons that love each other and share a good moment |
| When he wanted to lick her |
| 26 – the position and their face |
| Page 55 your side note and lots of other parts |
| i don’t even know |
| The bath scene. |
| The long monologues on philosiphy, Ideology, and human emotion |
| Bath scene |
| Tenderness. |
| If you need help, come …… dropping out of the tension between them. |
| The part right between page 1 and page 290-whateveritwas |
| The bathtime, it was so playful and there was a bit of friction between the vagina walls and half ot the shaft at the end, that’s always nice to see/imagine/feel from time to time, specially if it’s this kinky… |
| it is sexy and cute, flirty and sweet |
| Just the intimacy made it 1000000x hotter. |
| The Entire Story line is sublimely erotic and breathtaking. |
| The nighttime scene where they’re so both horny. The guards on the moon-moon. |
| The intimacy and sheer closeness. A lot of us need their person, a 4th-dimensional being. Someone who knows us, who has always known us, who will always know us. The sibling or twin sex thing is more an abstract need concept highlighting that dream. |
| The actual bath time! |
| Jack talks Charlie out of harming herself |
| Non-sexy stuff is probably the pimple-popping scene, because it was really cute. |
| Can’t say, loved every bit of it. |
| I can’t say it was the best bit but it hit the feels, hard. The part about the selfharm was like a blast from the past. Had a friend once who did that and it was just horrible. My regret was that I couldn’t do anything to help – compared to Jack.
I am excited to see how Charlie and Jack’s relationship is going to develop from here on out. The last act was thrilling and heart-throbbingly, just roller-coaster of emotions was going on there. A barrier has been broken and I want to know what’s going to happen. |
| a) the knife in the foot – although not realistic, made so much more of a (gentle) man of him. b) you saved the doggie for the final scene – yes! My favourite style. Everyone’s favourite, I am certain. |
| a) the knife in the foot – although not realistic, made so much more of a (gentle) man of him. b) you saved the doggie for the final scene – yes! My favourite style. Everyone’s favourite, I am certain. |
| page 246, possibly your best image yet |
| When Jack stops Charlie from cutting herself. The feels. It really makes you realize how much they love need each other. |
| Charlie staring at Jacks large erection as he knelt before her on his knees |
| Page 258 |
| I’m a huge fan of facesitting, but in comic form it was hella hot when Charlie was kissing jacks penis (for future reference the most sensitive part is the little tendony bit from the bottom of the head to the foreskin) *eyes camera* |
| I thought that bath scene was incredibly sexy |
| I think the emotional connection between the main characters is well developed |
| All of it… |
| Bath because it was hot |
| Syncing the music to the comic was great, timed it perfectly. |
Question: anything else you wanna say?
Answers:
| Unknown-evil pawn spitting on his/her helmet. |
| The tub game, the oral (especially the sitting part), the kissing and the REAL feeling of love. |
| I really can’t help but to love the henchmen, always gives me a laugh and a break |
| The Musical interlude of Evey Reborn – Dario Marianelli in their last (First?) Lovemaking scene was the perfect addition to the reading of those pages. One of the best that I have ever experienced. Thank You for Your hard work in this Volume of Lithium 7, I appreciate it! Cheers! |
| When he realized the joy of a good bj. AAH magic moments |
| That’s cute. “Favorite bit”. (like the whole series isn’t everyone’s favorite already) |
| Yes just yes |
| developing of them to the max |
| The bath scene… just half? lol |
| Her blowjob!! Cause i love to get blowjobs and cum in a warm mouth! |
| Teasing 🙂 |
| I quite liked the start and was enjoying the middle when the end came along! A bit like Charlie really |
| The whole thing, really. But my favorite is when Jack ties Charlie up and has his way with her. |
| Knifen situation, because it is sexless part and it is realy good dialog |
| Full nude penetrative sex (ala bath and love making) |
| My favorite part starts around page two and ends right at the end. Seriously it is the tied to the bed pussy eating. |
| The part where Jack stops charlie from cuting hereslef. |
| Got to say the suggestion to play that song for the last 25 pages was just… spot on. I know this sounds like ass kissing but dont care. Always though some scenes comics needed the right background song while reading them. |
| The entire story line |
| all of it dont need to tell you i’ve waited so long for this moment |
| Sexy bits… because – err – sex is best! |
| the bit where charlie just mugs for the viewer after the “just inside?” made me laugh actually out loud. definite favorite there, but tbh it was all killer and no filler for me(which is less specific, so prolly less helpful) |
| Honestly, when Jack just made Charlie drop the knife and talked about their real mom and what she went through. Kinda hit a tiny bit close to home. |
| When they made love |
| The bath scene, so sexy and hot (shiny). |
| My favorite bit was the bathtub “half doesn’t count right?” bit because it shows just how horny both of them are. They make their own rules. |
| It sounds silly, but my favorite bit was the correct usage of blood is thicker then water. 😀 |
| The build up to climatic scenes is so good and unbearable at the same time. Drama |
| It was nice all around, but the music bit really lifted it. I was skeptical when I read about it earlier, but somehow it matched up to the pages just right, it really dictated a mood, where otherwise you’re left to make something up in your head. I guess that’s why they use musical scores in movies, it sets the tone. Either way, it worked far better than I thought it would. |
| The bathtub was a lot of fun |
| The last scene. Because it’s the siblings finally submitting to their lust. |
| the ending |
| ALL OF IT |
| That your work has emotional depth |
| when Charlie gave him a blow job,,, |
| The back and fourth in the night. |
| Despite the fact I am craving for the sex scenes, I like the “endless” foreplay they do. I like that they just don’t jump on each other. |
| really liked the bit between p1 and p264? I really enjoyed the 2:56am gag on p193. |
| The end. When they make love. I dunno, call me corny or whatever, but I do love people just… loving each other. |
| p 224 Puts the story to a whole new level |
| The tension between them, my heart is pounding every time. I freaking love this!!!! |
| The sex in the bathtub |
| Page 212 first panel, Love HHTTG |
| The bit where Jack stops Charlie from cutting. Very real and I’ve been in that situation from Jack’s perspective. |
| The candid talk about masturbating. Being casual about something intimate has always been a huge turn on for me, your work tickles my fancy with sniperlike precision. |
| the bath scene 🙂 |
| Probably something inside i assume. Again, haven’t read it yet but i assume it is going to be awesome. |
| The night part. You painted the “heat” between the two very well with this part. |
| Jack talking to Charlie about making his first time mean something |
| The lovemaking scene of course! I could feel the passion they shared, from the beginning of the scene before they made love to the climax. The song ended right after they came together, which coincidentally (or not ;-P) was the same time I did. And it was epic, let me tell you…. |
| The music part, it fit pretty well |
| Everything is really cool, a great story … |
| bath time will NEVER be the same |
| I liked the love making scene at the end. The song you said to put on brought the whole thing to another level. |
| When charlie wants to go shopping & starts to tell her fantasies to jack to persuade him to join. |
| The bit with the music. That was a fantastic idea. The emotions and expressions were good too. ^^ |
| The sex, it teased so well, with a sudden push balls deep. |
| The first and last part; love nudity |
| Tying her to the bed. I’ve always wanted to do that exact same thing to my girlfriend for the exact same reaso but she’s to chicken. |
| Bit as humouristic moment? Most of them, winks at the reader and jokes in the story. |
| pages from 15 to 66 and from 81 to 94 |
| as a (wanna-be) writer i have to say that your pacing is damn near perfect. the build-up to the consummation that occurs in this comic was so long but never felt meandering or wasteful. the pay-off was satisfying and felt earned by the characters. the breakthrough moment between Charlie and Jack felt magical. |
| Page 225, where they take each others hands after deciding they don’t have play games anymore. (Though I hope they’ll figure out that games still are a lot of fun.) |
| She’s worried about Skylar. |
| The whole fucking thing (sorry for the bad word) |
| Lots to say… the dialogs, the models (their faces mainly), the story |
| ALL OF IT |
| The intimate attention to detail – both story and art. |
| The conflict that was brought into play after the shopping. |
| There were many. Perhaps mostly the part with Jack stoping his sister from hurting herself. I could connect to the way both were thinking. It reminded me of some experiences of my own past. |
| The morning before school, were he refuses to play games. It was a good plot twist, and a satisfing shift in tone. To embrase love as pure and wonderful as it is. A great moment. |
| Hell of a comic |
| nice sex? (reading it gives me huge boner…) |
| c/o e-hentai (maybe i can download this from google later?) |
| The bath scene, how they finally getting in ther more and more |
| there has to be a favorite? |
| entire series!! |
| The whole “we haven’t done it yet because it didn’t go all the way in” series of scenes and story was the best bit for me because it brought back some memories. |
| the bathtub. Because they’ve finally given in after all the steamy foreplay and teasing. |
| 6:0whatever, the moment Jack walks away from Charlie. It’s so rare to find any media that allows guys to want romance for themselves. His little speech is a bit naive but really sweet and honest and all I ever wanted for… |
| The scene where Jack tells Charlie his wish for his “first time”, the look of understanding from Charlie and from there words are not needed |
| The end of the knife scene, when Charlie realizes that Jack had ignored the blade stuck in his foot for the whole conversation, just to help talk through her depressive thoughts… with love. |
| When jack proposed charlie that he wants to love her properly….. |
| the bedrooms visits because they are honnest with their feelings and sharing them plus their teenage stamina |
| When Jack finally opens up about his first time being real and not a game, because that is the dream, 2 persons that love each other and share a good moment |
| When he wanted to lick her |
| 26 – the position and their face |
| Page 55 your side note and lots of other parts |
| i don’t even know |
| The bath scene. |
| The long monologues on philosiphy, Ideology, and human emotion |
| Bath scene |
| Tenderness. |
| If you need help, come …… dropping out of the tension between them. |
| The part right between page 1 and page 290-whateveritwas |
| The bathtime, it was so playful and there was a bit of friction between the vagina walls and half ot the shaft at the end, that’s always nice to see/imagine/feel from time to time, specially if it’s this kinky… |
| it is sexy and cute, flirty and sweet |
| Just the intimacy made it 1000000x hotter. |
| The Entire Story line is sublimely erotic and breathtaking. |
| The nighttime scene where they’re so both horny. The guards on the moon-moon. |
| The intimacy and sheer closeness. A lot of us need their person, a 4th-dimensional being. Someone who knows us, who has always known us, who will always know us. The sibling or twin sex thing is more an abstract need concept highlighting that dream. |
| The actual bath time! |
| Jack talks Charlie out of harming herself |
| Non-sexy stuff is probably the pimple-popping scene, because it was really cute. |
| Can’t say, loved every bit of it. |
| I can’t say it was the best bit but it hit the feels, hard. The part about the selfharm was like a blast from the past. Had a friend once who did that and it was just horrible. My regret was that I couldn’t do anything to help – compared to Jack.
I am excited to see how Charlie and Jack’s relationship is going to develop from here on out. The last act was thrilling and heart-throbbingly, just roller-coaster of emotions was going on there. A barrier has been broken and I want to know what’s going to happen. |
| a) the knife in the foot – although not realistic, made so much more of a (gentle) man of him. b) you saved the doggie for the final scene – yes! My favourite style. Everyone’s favourite, I am certain. |
| a) the knife in the foot – although not realistic, made so much more of a (gentle) man of him. b) you saved the doggie for the final scene – yes! My favourite style. Everyone’s favourite, I am certain. |
| page 246, possibly your best image yet |
| When Jack stops Charlie from cutting herself. The feels. It really makes you realize how much they love need each other. |
| Charlie staring at Jacks large erection as he knelt before her on his knees |
| Page 258 |
| I’m a huge fan of facesitting, but in comic form it was hella hot when Charlie was kissing jacks penis (for future reference the most sensitive part is the little tendony bit from the bottom of the head to the foreskin) *eyes camera* |
| I thought that bath scene was incredibly sexy |
| I think the emotional connection between the main characters is well developed |
| All of it… |
| Bath because it was hot |
| Syncing the music to the comic was great, timed it perfectly. |
